Thursday 29 June 2017

My Speech Reflection

My Speech Reflection
My speech

I need to reflect on...
  • What was Good...
  • I red it
  • Looked up a few times
  • Was pretty loud

  • What was Bad...
  • Need to use more punctuation
  • Use engaging eye contact
  • Use more gestures  
  • Speak more louder
  • Engage the audience a lot more 
  • Get people to look at me


  • What was Interesting... 
  • Got Mrs Hobbs to laugh 
  • No one in the audience laughed but Teacher
  • Audience was drawing on pieces of paper😢😭😭😢


Thursday 1 June 2017

The race of her life

The Race of her life
By Joseph

On 1st of June we wrote about a race a special race enjoy.
On your marks get set go the gun thunders with a loud Bang !!! . It roars around the stadium leaving the crowd silent. The runners spring  off  of there feet and race for victory so as Usain bolt was gaining his speed the crowd went louder and louder the commentators couldn't believe their eyes. Lady glitter sparkles will might actually have a chance of beating Usain Bolt. The commentators announced on the echoing megaphones. The more Lady glitter sparkles would catch up the more the crowd and commentators would yell  Lady glitter sparkles,lady glitter sparkles the crowd chanted. Their getting close to the finish line. Go Lady Glitter Sparkles screamed her mum. Go Go Go!!! She yelled everyone looked at her she was so embarrassed Lady glitter sparkles could hear her mum so she sprinted past Usain bolt…Then...
Lady Glitter Sparkles wins. The commentators announced. The crowd goes wild throwing their hands up so high they could of hit a bird. So that was the first time lady glitter sparkles has ever won a race in the olympics. It was the race of her life.